27/11/2015

Today's lesson we went through our scenes in order and got some feedback from our teacher. We was told that we need use more characterisation, to make our character have more meaning and make them realistic. We was also told that we need to make the last scene when the daughter character gets killed by the mum character much more effective because it is the highest climax in the play. For next lesson we need to start to carry on going through the whole play and give ideas to make them better.